22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3

https://youtu.be/Uyvo6p3kX8U

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  1. Brianna GregorioApril 3, 2020 at 10:36 AM

    I thought your elevator pitch was great! It was super clear and just the right speed. I was able to understand you perfectly and all the points you were making because you maintained the same pace and tone throughout the whole thing. I really liked how you opened with a situation, it really caught my attention. Also, great eye contact and persona throughout the video. My only suggestion is to include the feedback you received on past pitches and what changes you made in the new one. Great job!

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  2. Veronica RosenbaumApril 4, 2020 at 11:53 AM

    Hi Skylar. I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. It was concise and you clearly stated what you are trying to solve. You made your pitch very easy to follow and understand. You never talked too fast and did a great job grabbing and keeping my attention. As always, great work Skylar!

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  3. John DillonApril 5, 2020 at 6:35 PM

    Hi Skylar,

    Well done with your elevator pitch! I can definitely see that you made a lot of progress on it from the last time around. One of the things that stood out most to me was that you talked more about the specifics of your product and how you intend to implement it. One piece of advice that I would have for next time is to try and give the speech from a standing position as opposed to a sitting one, and to limit the body movement as it can be distracting at times. Otherwise, keep up the great work!

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  4. Nicholas ScibiliaApril 6, 2020 at 10:18 AM

    Hey Skylar,
    I thought your pitch was fantastic! It sounded well-thought out, it was smooth, to the point and you had a wonderful hook. It seems to me you have perfected your skills with making an elevator pitch for this product! I always think you sound clear and speak with some diction and to me that is something that stands out when giving a pitch, speech or presentation, because it shows confidence in what you are saying. Great Job!

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